Комментарии к проектам VI Business Project Competition
Сильные и слабые стороны проектов. Какие части Вашего проекта доработать, развить, усилить, изменить?
Eco Culture
Strengths: a good idea which is based on current trends
Improvements: you need more research to support your plan
Comments: target audience 18-40 year olds «why this group»
My Fest
Strengths: a competent plan with some thought about the target market
Improvements: more detail in regards to how to market this idea is required
Uni Searcher
Strengths: a very high tech proposal but there is little research to prove to me that it would work
Improvements: very high risk and needs more through research
Snap Map
Strengths: a very modern idea which could work as it combines environmental issues and new technology
Improvements: needs more real world research
Lovely Paws
Strengths: a unique idea in this market which should have a good chance of success
Improvements: better customer and market analysis required
Improvements: better customer and market analysis required
Healthy Future
Strengths: A relevant idea in the current market with some supportive research
Improvements: A clearer explanation of operations needed
Comments: Source of data?
Comments: Source of data?
Baku Bay
Strengths: This idea is quite basic and has lots of detail in costs, but not much in the marketing of the concept.
Improvements: Needs more originality
Waste Processing Plant
Strengths: A topical issue but the plan fails to prove its financial credibility
Improvements: Need more detail about how this business will make money
Comments: financial Plan, not enough detail
Bakery for a Dream
Strengths: An idea that will have lots of competition and lacks from differentation.
Improvements: Need more details on strategy and marketing, company description very detailed.
Comments: Competetion, need more detail here
Bookworm
Strengths: A plan that needs more thought regarding the target market and the marketing mix
Improvements: needs a more in depth marketing section
